Fry

Mar. 1st, 2009 01:56 pm
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>>Fry

TITLE: Fry
AUTHOR:[livejournal.com profile] ultraviolet9a
SPOILER: none.
GENRE: Gen. (could be debated)
CHARACTERS: Dean, Castiel
SUMMARY: uh…
RATING: PG-13
FEEDBACK: Dude…duh.
DISCLAIMER: I don’t own them. Don’t sue me. If I did own them, I would have run off somewhere exotic with them as my…uh…companions. And not many clothes involved.
BETA: by shiny [livejournal.com profile] pdragon76



He has the fry in his hand for a long time before he decides to put it in his mouth. He looks at it, holds it up at different angles, observes the golden-yellow colour of it. He brings it to his nose, sniffs, then turns it some more between his fingertips.

Dean drops his head on the shiny plastic surface of the table.

“Just.put.it.in.your.mouth, Cas.” His voice is muffled by his arms. “It’s a fry, not some unholy shit.”

“I am deciding, Dean.”

The words are so somber that Dean raises his head, then his palms skywards in a mix of exasperation and resignation.

“Deciding? This is a fry. You put it in your mouth. You chew. You swallow. End of story. Just eat the damn fry. Please. It’s the only way you’d understand, she said.”

Castiel sighs. Dean scratches the back of his head. The name Anna hovers unspoken between them. Castiel breaks the silence first.

“What if it is one of the Seals?”

Dean tips his head forwards, mouth half-open in his inability to come up with a reply.

Castiel carefully lays the fry on top of the others. It’s a gentle gesture, as if the position of the fry will determine the unraveling of planetary systems.

“Dean.” Castiel folds his hands neatly on the table. “Man fell because of an apple. Who is to say that a fry is not forbidden as well? For angels?”

“But… it’s… a fry! Besides, I thought the whole forbidden fruit thing was just a metaphor for sex.”

Castiel tilts his head to the side. “A metaphor,” he says. “Hm.”

He looks at Dean for a long, long time. Dean fidgets under the scrutiny. Castiel straightens his head, and shifts his gaze to the plate of fries between them.

Then he reaches out with one determined gesture, takes the fry and puts it in his mouth. He chews first slowly, then frantically, with eyes closed tight.

There’s a loud gulp as he swallows.

“So?” Dean opens his arms. “Any revelation? Do you understand whatever it was you’re supposed to?”

Castiel opens his eyes. And just for a tiny moment there’s a glint there, not entirely angelic.

-The End.



SIDENOTE: Yeah, I know it was Ruby who said fries were deep-fried crack or whatever. But… well… I thought I’d reverse it. Fruit are overrated anyway.

Could probably be seen as a… spin-off to All God’s children need travelling shoes.


Date: 2009-03-01 12:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pandarus.livejournal.com
FABulous! Gah!

Date: 2009-03-02 04:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
Heeeeh! :D Thank you so much!

Date: 2009-03-01 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maychorian.livejournal.com
:D Very cute.

Date: 2009-03-02 04:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

Date: 2009-03-01 02:16 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] theladyscribe
Oh, Castiel! Why so serious all the time?

This was wonderful! Delightful! Adorable! :D

Date: 2009-03-02 04:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
Ah, yes. Writing this was light and fluffy indeed!

Thank you for reading!

Date: 2009-03-01 02:43 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] smilla02.livejournal.com
Now, this is what I call awesome subtext! :D
Awesome!

Date: 2009-03-02 04:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
*manic grin* Yeah, it was fun doing the subtext. I'm glad you like it, lovely!

Date: 2009-03-01 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erinrua.livejournal.com
BUAHAHAHA!

Hee.

Oh, Cas. You are disturbingly *adorable* for an angel.

And Dean's exasperation is priceless. LOL! Thanks for the smile, sweetie! :-)

Date: 2009-03-02 04:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
You're welcome! Thank you for reading! Cas is just sooooo cute, yes.

Date: 2009-03-02 04:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
Thank you. :D

Date: 2009-03-02 02:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] may7fic.livejournal.com
“But… it’s… a fry! Besides, I thought the whole forbidden fruit thing was just a metaphor for sex.”

Castiel tilts his head to the side. “A metaphor,” he says. “Hm.”


Perfectly them!

Date: 2009-03-02 04:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
HEEEEH. Thank you. They are fun when they're not angsting.

Date: 2009-03-02 02:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brigid-tanner.livejournal.com
I'm really enjoying this little series of stories. Lovely.

Date: 2009-03-02 04:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Castiel is too hot and too adorable to not be included in fics.

Date: 2009-03-02 06:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] labseraph.livejournal.com
Ah ... your love for Castiel is a wonderful thing. Watching the world through his eyes is certainly an experience. Reconciling his angel-ness and his interaction with humanity while in his host is definitely not easy, hein?

Date: 2009-03-02 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
He is interesting, oh yeah. *loves him* So many layers and speculations!

I'm so glad you like it!

Date: 2009-03-02 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eesia.livejournal.com
Heh, tempting angel much?

Date: 2009-03-02 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
Oh yeah. :D

Thank you for reading!

Date: 2009-03-02 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eesia.livejournal.com
Oh yeah
I so approve :D

Date: 2009-03-02 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] insight2.livejournal.com
I would have run off somewhere exotic with them as my…uh…companions. And not many clothes involved.

PLZ TAKE ME WITH YOU.

Castiel tilts his head to the side. “A metaphor,” he says. “Hm.”

He looks at Dean for a long, long time. Dean fidgets under the scrutiny.


Is that flirting I see there???

Oh man, they are both such stupid darlings <3

Date: 2009-03-02 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
There is flirting yes. *beams* But very subtexty, i think.

And yeah, they are just frakking adorable!

Thank you for reading.

ps awesome icon!

Date: 2009-03-02 05:56 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lessrest.livejournal.com
Awesome!

This...
“What if it is one of the Seals?”
...made me laugh out loud. :D

Date: 2009-03-02 07:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad it made you laugh!

Date: 2009-03-02 06:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] cream-fudge.livejournal.com
Whahaahahaa AWESOME *giggles*

Date: 2009-03-02 07:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

Date: 2009-03-02 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ran-cl.livejournal.com
hee this was so cute >3

Date: 2009-03-02 07:07 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-03-02 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] uglybusiness.livejournal.com
Love the subtext, so wonderful :) Thank you!

Date: 2009-03-03 02:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
Writing the subtext was half the fun! Thank you!

Date: 2009-03-02 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] huntress69.livejournal.com
“What if it is one of the Seals?”

I nearly spewed coffee over this line. Nicely done and thanks for the giggles.

Date: 2009-03-03 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad it amused you.

Date: 2009-03-02 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xphoenixrising.livejournal.com
*chokes on oreo*

Date: 2009-03-03 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
*slaps back, hands you water* Thank you for reading!

Date: 2009-03-03 12:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] just-ruth.livejournal.com
*laughs* Oh, that's good! I suspect that twinkle in Castiel's eye is more from the reaction he's gotten from Dean than the actual fry.

Date: 2009-03-03 02:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
Ooooh yes, i suspect so too. Thank you for reading!

Date: 2009-03-03 12:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] latvela.livejournal.com
And here I was just thinking a little sadly to myself that the Dean/Cas/Food fics were becoming fewer. This is adorable!

So the fry, like the apple, is also a metaphor for sex? Hee. Oh yeah. Eat Dean's fry, Cas!

Date: 2009-03-03 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
Eat Dean's fry, Cas! That is one of the dirtiest and best lines i've read in a while!:D

Thank you!

Date: 2009-03-03 08:20 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lark_ascends
“What if it is one of the Seals?”

Dean tips his head forwards, mouth half-open in his inability to come up with a reply.


Gold.

Date: 2009-03-03 02:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
:D Heeeeeeh. I could see it clearly in my head, i could.

Thank you.

Date: 2009-03-03 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riverbella.livejournal.com
Sometimes a fry is just a fry...but probably not this time. Hee! “What if it is one of the Seals?” *dies from awesome*

Date: 2009-03-03 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com
Heeeh! I'm glad you like it, thank you. Light pieces can be fun (and usually are followed by dark pieces for some reason. *facepalm*)

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