lollipop fic (and some other cheesecake stuff)

[ultraviolet9a]

I'm in a writing frenzy lately. Don't know why. 

Also, I'm tired of my layout. One of these days I might have to do something about it. *yawn*

And I made cheesecake today. (No joke, kroki_refur, I actually made cheesecake and I didn't think anything of it until it was done and I REALIZED THAT I MADE CHEESECAKE. My subconscious is obviously having a blast.)

Extra hugs to hiyacynth  today (just because) *sends her lots of cheesecake and ice cream and hugs and naked Sammylove*

Also, here's my drabble for the spn_het_lovechallenge.

>> lollipop

 

TITLE: lollipop

AUTHOR: ultraviolet9a
SPOILER: none

GENRE: het

CHARACTERS: Jo/Ash

SUMMARY: short drabble on the said pairing. And lollipops.
RATING: PG-16

FEEDBACK: Dude…duh. 
DISCLAIMER: Don’t make profit, don’t sue.

NOTE: 15 min Saturday surprise challenge in spn_het_love. (Took me 15 minutes. Maybe a few more seconds, but who can be that accurate, huh?)

 

Mouth sticky, corner harsh against her back as she’s pushed on the pool table. Not sure she wants this, the sugar and the artificial fruity splash in her mouth, and underneath it the taste of beer and late nights up, smell of smoke (and grease) and sweat, and his hair tickling her and the balls (both his and the pool table’s) rubbing against her and it’s dawn and most things are quiet and her mother is sleeping upstairs and they might just get caught and oh god, she’s not sure she wants this, but she’s having it anyway, because this isn’t just a nameless face/body, this is him, and it’s her birthday and she wants to be done with it, wants to know what it feels like and it won’t be some nameless jog or freak or whatever, not even George she’s got this big crush on cuz he’d never look her way and even if he did he’d just cheapen everything anyway and make her feel like a scared rabbit, not like now, now it’s alright because she trusts him, trusts him with everything she has and oh she knows it will hurt and it does but she trusts him, loves him, but then pain goes numb and turns sweet and she muffles her mouth on his shoulder because mom mustn’t hear and oh god now she gets what the whole fuss is about and underneath the fruity sugar taste and the beer now she can only taste him, essence of him, man genius badass best friend forever and oh my god where did he learn to do that and oh my god oh my god mustn’t yell mustn’t cry.

 

Ash pants, slides away, leans beside her. Then he reaches over and takes the half-finished lollipop lying there in its own sugary near-death experience. He takes a long suck at it, then takes it out with a plop.

 

“Happy birthday, kid,” he says and then Jo grins and guides the lollipop to her mouth.

 

She already feels older.

 

-The End.

 

SIDENOTE: Go me. Deflowering fics are fun. (For Dean’s deflowering go here.)

Comments

[hiyacynth.livejournal.com]

You know, I should have KNOWN you would be the one to make Ash sexy to me. Loved this, loved the dynamic here. It felt really true. And now I must go revisit Dean's deflowering because yum.

Then he reaches over and takes the half-finished lollipop lying there in its own sugary near-death experience.

Brilliance.

Thanks, hon!!

[ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com]

You know, I should have KNOWN you would be the one to make Ash sexy to me. Wasn't me, that was Ash's doing. Smart is sexy, see? Intelligence is sexy. And when you have a male best friend and the lines get blurry that's damn sexy too. :)

Heh! I'm proud of that sentence too. *pets lollipop*

You're welcome, sweetie.

[lark_ascends]

Fantastic detail.

[ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[zelost-mind.livejournal.com]

Wait, they did what with that lollipop? *gasp* ;)

Heh. Very nice. Jo an' Ash should always be getting it on. Pool tables and sugary things are just added bonuses for us readers. You spoil us, you do. *smothers you with kisses*

[ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com]

Wait, they did what with that lollipop? *gasp* ;) I let that part vague on purpose. *manic grin*

And well, my flist's been generally spoiling me too, so I thought I'd return the favour! *huuuugs*

[brin-bailey.livejournal.com]

Hee. I could really get behind Jo/Ash. Cute fic!

Also? You made cheesecake? That's awesome! :D

[ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com]

Thank you! And yes, I just had a taste of it. Awesome. Dean would so marry me if I gave him a slice. *manic grin*

Uhm...to fully understand the significance of cheesecake as opposed to pie however, do check this out. Trust me.

http://kroki-refur.livejournal.com/131418.html

and

http://kroki-refur.livejournal.com/134377.html

You'll never be the same again. :)

[brin-bailey.livejournal.com]

Hee. I've been quoting that thing all week. Non-SPN watching friends and family have been giving me strange looks...

Seriously, is it too much to ask that when I tell people not to fall on pie, don't look at me like I have three heads? Or if they could even answer that they much prefer cheesecake to pie? Hmm?

Dean would so marry me if I gave him a slice.

Dean would totally marry for food! Especially cheesecake :D

[ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com]

Heh! Look at this! Just found it at buffyaddict13's!

http://weblogs.wgntv.com/network/cwsource/2007/05/supernatural_fan_art_dive_into.html

And yes, of course he would marry for food. :)

[brin-bailey.livejournal.com]

Dude awesome! I'm so glad that some of the really outstanding and awesome things that the fans do, are getting recognized. Especially Ten Expressions and the Episode Reviews of Doom. Refur should totally get "fell on pie" as a euphemism for death, in a the dictionary or thesaurus or something.

die
Definition: pass away
Synonyms: be taken, cash in, check out, croak, decease, drop dead, eat it, expire, fall on pie, finish, relinquish life, succumb.

Of course, I'm sure there's a number of people out there who think we're crazy, but still. ;)

[ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com]

Heh! I'd LOVE to see that in a dictionary. And then in every day speech.

"OMG, what happened to that evil guy in that evil movie?"

"He had some pie."

[(Anonymous)]

You know I loathe Jo for Dean but for Ash she's perfect.

[ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com]

Hm. I presume that you just forgot to log on. And I also presume that you're e313. Because I know for a fact that you loathe ANYONE for Dean really. Oh yes, you do. :)

[astrothsknot.livejournal.com]

I love the Jo of fic and this is no exception. I really can see her asking Ash to do the dirty deed and I love how the flow picks up the "here and now" of that first desperate fuck when you just want to damn well get it over with

[ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com]

In my head Jo's first guy is Ash. I can't help it for some reason. I'm glad that worked out here! :)

Thank you!

[iamstealthyone.livejournal.com]

I really like the stream of consciousness feel here, how Jo's nervousness comes across so well. And I loved this line:

Then he reaches over and takes the half-finished lollipop lying there in its own sugary near-death experience.

*g*

Nicely done.

[ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com]

Heh! Thank you! Am happy the "what the fuck am I doing here?! (pun intended)" of Jo came through.

[nixwilliams.livejournal.com]

YAY! ASH! AND JO! awesome.

you know, i hardly ever read het (not ANTI-het, just don't read it) but i am always, always SO THERE for ash/jo. i think they are the crackiest, most hilarious pairing!

and you did this well, too - deflowering ftw! oh my god where did he learn to do that - you KNOW ash has skillz!

[ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com]

I'm a gen girl at heart too, but the occasional het will flow. ;) But yes. I don't know why but I'm damn sure Ash is awesome in bed. Like, more skilled than anyone else on the show actually. Or equally, anyway.

Thank you for reading!

[theladyscribe]

How is it that you make me like my least favorite characters? (Ash and John, if you're curious.) It's a talent you have, and a rare one.

This was awesome and totally in-character for both Jo and Ash. I could definitely see this happening.

[ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com]

Ok, I'll let that John comment go because you say the nicest things ever! :)

Thank you so much. And yes, I think Ash and Jo have shared good sex a lot in the past.

Golly

[labseraph.livejournal.com]

So short and yet ... kinda hot with a dollop of psyche examination.I think you really got into Jo's head here. It's a nice interpretation of what shapes her, the self-declared "freak with a knife collection".

Re: Golly

[ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :) To be honest, it wasn't consciously planned, cuz, you know. 15 minute writing.