Help? Pretty please with sugar on top?

I've got a small fic (800 words) that would probably be eternally grateful if it was betaed by a native speaker. It's a pg13 xover, that requires only knowledge of the spn verse. (And uhm. English too. Heh.)

Would anyone like to beta it?

Pretty pretty please, oh shiny flist?

Speaking of shiny flist, please to be sending hugs and good vibes to buffyaddict13and hiyacynth. And basically the whole flist/ fandom whatever. Just because. December hasn't started well, has it? *sigh* 

ETA: i've got the shiniest flist in the world, I swear. Thanks, ileliberte.